Weak copy, rewritten, with every change explained

Each entry takes a real homepage headline, product description or email subject line and sets it against a version that works harder, with a line-by-line note on why every change was made.

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The full set of rewrites

Weak copy, rewritten line by line, with the reasoning behind each change made plain.

Understanding Headline Scorer

A practical guide to Headline Scorer: what it means, how it works, and how to use the interactive headline scorer.

Editing AI Copy: A Line-by-Line Pass

Editing AI Copy: A Line-by-Line Pass

One page of unedited AI output, rewritten line by line with commentary explaining every change — the clearest demonstration of the craft this site teaches.

How to Write a Homepage

How to Write a Homepage

A step-by-step guide to writing homepage copy — above-the-fold value proposition, section hierarchy, headline patterns, CTA placement and social proof, with worked examples.

How to Write a Product Page

How to Write a Product Page

Feature-to-benefit translation, scannable structure, sensory language, handling objections, and the difference between e-commerce listings and landing pages — with a before-and-after rewrite.